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I'm only a human sweetheart
Nothing you do can change that
so accept the fact that sometimes illusions get in the way of our feelings
get it straight
straighter than you have it now
you just don't understand honey
I wish you did
but you never have, and never will
So allow me this last dance
and the leave me forever, or realize that these steps aren't perfect
Yeah, this waltz has been passed down for generations
these flimsy genes
these compounds will never be perfect
the DNA alters
There are faults
and misprints
but we continue to read, and once its read, the action starts
and continues
like cancer invading a cell
Its only one gene
thats all it takes
I step (3x)
I continue to dance
my feet bare and avoiding your needles
that you have places so carefully in this wooden floor
I continue to miss
you continue to place them
until I find a different partner who removes them
and places feathers in their place
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Author's Comments

Just wrote this.
Part of missing the needles was that I knew the person well enough to predict where he'd put them, but he didn't know me well enough to place them where I'd step.
The feathers don't have major signifigance. Except that they're light, and represeont the illusion of love, which could easly be bloen away.
Somteimes its like a little kid blowing a feather, ro just watching the wind carry it. Mesmerized by it, but eventually the child loses interest and walks away.

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:iconartlicious-remedy:
I like this one a lot, lotsa metaphors and such.
I like the concept, nice job :thumbsup:

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Thanks.
Yay.
I have 138 page views... does that mean that I've seen that many pages, or that that many people have looked at mine??? I'm sooo confused.
:iconartlicious-remedy:
LOL
it means that that many ppl have visited ur page.

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